Comments on: Her swiveling arm deposits a sock on the floor… http://www.nikhilpahwa.com/2006/04/04/114415968201624367/ In the realm of ideas, everything depends on enthusiasm; in the real world, all rests on perseverance Thu, 09 Sep 2010 01:59:58 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.5 By: Rose http://www.nikhilpahwa.com/2006/04/04/114415968201624367/#comment-300 Rose Sun, 14 Jan 2007 13:16:51 +0000 http://www.mixedbag.in/2006/114415968201624367/#comment-300 I quite loved the piece. Very much actually. I didnt however like 'deposit' in the first line, i think it jeopardizes the harmony in the sentence. We should meet up sometime... im sorry, i totally judge people by how articulate they are and you have been judged very favorably in that respect. I quite loved the piece. Very much actually. I didnt however like ‘deposit’ in the first line, i think it jeopardizes the harmony in the sentence. We should meet up sometime… im sorry, i totally judge people by how articulate they are and you have been judged very favorably in that respect.

]]> By: mayank http://www.nikhilpahwa.com/2006/04/04/114415968201624367/#comment-299 mayank Thu, 13 Apr 2006 07:13:00 +0000 http://www.mixedbag.in/2006/114415968201624367/#comment-299 is it the new writing style or only i didn't get it. anyway keep writing is it the new writing style or only i didn’t get it. anyway keep writing

]]> By: tarun http://www.nikhilpahwa.com/2006/04/04/114415968201624367/#comment-298 tarun Thu, 06 Apr 2006 07:55:00 +0000 http://www.mixedbag.in/2006/114415968201624367/#comment-298 You should go away to some really rustic place in the northeast or one south of delhi with a friend and just backpack across the region for a while and you'll feel like your home is your own mind. And there won't be crap to distract you nd indulge you in things not worth living for. You'll be free to write more... and more... and summore... Maybe you can go the Salman Rushdie way (literary wise) and the JK Rowling way ($$ wise)... We're all stuck. aren't we? Cages can both protect and imprison. "How much can you possibly know about yourself if you've never been in a fight? I don't want to die without any scars." - Tyler Durden, FC "slaves with white collars. Advertising has us chasing cars and clothes, working jobs we hate so we can buy shit we don't need. We're the middle children of history, man. No purpose or place. We have no Great War. No Great Depression. Our Great War's a spiritual war... our Great Depression is our lives. We've all been raised on television to believe that one day we'd all be millionaires, and movie gods, and rock stars. But we won't. And we're slowly learning that fact. And we're very, very pissed off." You should go away to some really rustic place in the northeast or one south of delhi with a friend and just backpack across the region for a while and you’ll feel like your home is your own mind. And there won’t be crap to distract you nd indulge you in things not worth living for. You’ll be free to write more… and more… and summore…

Maybe you can go the Salman Rushdie way (literary wise) and the JK Rowling way ($$ wise)…

We’re all stuck. aren’t we? Cages can both protect and imprison.

“How much can you possibly know about yourself if you’ve never been in a fight? I don’t want to die without any scars.” - Tyler Durden, FC

“slaves with white collars. Advertising has us chasing cars and clothes, working jobs we hate so we can buy shit we don’t need. We’re the middle children of history, man. No purpose or place. We have no Great War. No Great Depression. Our Great War’s a spiritual war… our Great Depression is our lives. We’ve all been raised on television to believe that one day we’d all be millionaires, and movie gods, and rock stars. But we won’t. And we’re slowly learning that fact. And we’re very, very pissed off.”

]]> By: The Unrest Cure http://www.nikhilpahwa.com/2006/04/04/114415968201624367/#comment-297 The Unrest Cure Thu, 06 Apr 2006 03:59:00 +0000 http://www.mixedbag.in/2006/114415968201624367/#comment-297 Jai and Shreya: Thanks. I tend to go with the flow while writing. I do this for fun, yes? :D Will try to get the flow back one of these days...right now trying hard not to not study. Sue: Thanks. I'm just trying to not do the ordinary thing with this. Will rework it and make it more palpable. Jai and Shreya: Thanks. I tend to go with the flow while writing. I do this for fun, yes? :D

Will try to get the flow back one of these days…right now trying hard not to not study.

Sue: Thanks. I’m just trying to not do the ordinary thing with this. Will rework it and make it more palpable.

]]> By: Shreya http://www.nikhilpahwa.com/2006/04/04/114415968201624367/#comment-296 Shreya Wed, 05 Apr 2006 22:01:00 +0000 http://www.mixedbag.in/2006/114415968201624367/#comment-296 you put it up! and even on second read, its not putting off. i agree. you should work on this re. and meanwhile, watch dancer in the dark. you put it up!

and even on second read, its not putting off. i agree. you should work on this re. and meanwhile, watch dancer in the dark.

]]> By: Sue http://www.nikhilpahwa.com/2006/04/04/114415968201624367/#comment-295 Sue Wed, 05 Apr 2006 19:29:00 +0000 http://www.mixedbag.in/2006/114415968201624367/#comment-295 Needs work. Polishing is what I mean. Maybe expansion will help too. Needs work. Polishing is what I mean. Maybe expansion will help too.

]]> By: Jabberwock http://www.nikhilpahwa.com/2006/04/04/114415968201624367/#comment-294 Jabberwock Wed, 05 Apr 2006 17:28:00 +0000 http://www.mixedbag.in/2006/114415968201624367/#comment-294 I think you should consider expanding it a bit, there's a lot of promise here. Forget about the Kunzru story now and take it down a different track. I think you should consider expanding it a bit, there’s a lot of promise here. Forget about the Kunzru story now and take it down a different track.

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